I just think you see a caricature of yourself
with the bad parts
blown up
disproportionately
and the great parts
shrunken down
you don't look in a mirror and see
the way your smile brightens up the atmosphere
the selfless things you do
the sweet things that roll off your tongue
or the intelligent things too
or the face you make when you're thinking
or the way you can put people at ease
or the way you can set someone straight
when they're misguided
you focus on the few things
you've decided are wrong about yourself
and you never see
the beauty
banging on the glass of the mirror
begging for you to see
Your poem portrays very
Your poem portrays very well that a person is not only what you see of a person. And that there are many good qualities that can make up an individual. A good read I enjoyed your poem.
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