I stand, seeing an open space, I feel dead.
Have all the stars I've wish on, become weary and fled?
Please Lord, send them back to mend a broken, lonely heart.
I lied to myself, denying love, now she has to depart.
Will her Romeo love her dearly, leaving me, a mere Cyrano pleading?
I cannot blame her for her choice or any false misleading.
It was all my fault, I tried to be Othello, brave and one of dread.
Shakespeare has put me to rest with his pen, my character is dead.
Is my love dead also, surely not, but I miss holding you near.
I weep daily, but I hope that your Prince Charming loves you very dear.
Will he give his life for you, as Romeo did, his cherished Juliet?
Or will he be as Henry VIII, a cruel son of regret.
My sadness weighs on me, has Caesar's spirit plagued me with fear?
I must rule my own destiny, might I inquire advice of King Lear?
He could never give me riches greater than the love that I lock away.
"Oneself is one's best friend." as Marc Antony would say.
Hercules, with his great strength, still cries, for a man still has a heart.
I wish each day into a false well, for her love, how pathetic thou art!
I acknowledge the great Cassanova, as not having love at all.
As for my many women, I've held them close, yet I always fall.
When each one departed, a piece of my heart went too.
I asked the great Zeus of what I should do.
None of the classic odes gave me a remedy for my pain.
I've cut out my heart, despite my chest, romance is false - no gain.
although the piece is sad & forlorn, I really do think that the reference to the old classics is clever. It shows that a great deal of intelligence, thought & research went into the writing of this poem.
Well done.
Amy Riberdy
Gentle is the night♥
This poem is wonderful