this tear that hangs upon my lips
it lives upon your name
time has told it many things
but knows that you're to blame
things it wont experience
times i wont dare to name
though as it ages i seem to wonder
what will stay the same
i hope you learn to forgive
for the teardrops sake
time will tell its locked up fate
is it the cycle we'll break?
to inch slowly to the bottom
you've abused it through it all
or indeed maybe it has a choice
to survive it through.. or fall
very good. its deep, emotional and strong. i really like it. hey come check out my poems sometime and tell me what you think. from amanda carneiro