Stains on blank

The signals are confusing
I can't make sense of the colours pouring from your mouth...
On edge-
Fractured once before,

the chasm still openly weeps...
I tried to draw pictures of rainbows;

you covered them with brooding clouds.
I said let there be light
You struck me with bolts of disaster.
Let there be love
You hit me with torture...

You drown my colours,

I drown in yours.

 

Let me be 

There is no more to see

There is only black stains on blank.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

lovely write   :( though they

lovely write

 

:( though they sound like someone I would stop talking to :(


Much Love

Ashley

cevance's picture

Very compelling. I enjoyed

Very compelling. I enjoyed this very much.

SSmoothie's picture

This is good! I like where

This is good! I like where it's heading a little refinement and wallah a. Masterpiece! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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You Bolts

U-boats? Ha ha, a typo surely. I dream in hard adjectives and swift verbs, I see color pastel or vivid - or I am mirror-looking frequently ~~A~~


 

 

INKSTAIN's picture

typo. thanks

typo. thanks

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Blotters

I am loving the pen poised over the blot - inspiriing that ~A~