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erotic/ mature content You intoxicate
with erotic shock
of words to ride.
The stopping groans
in every direction.
My Athena,
your Venus,
an erect intersection.
We share the stares
of gasps silent upon our mouths.
And the slant
of a slide
sinking deep
between my screaming thighs.
Twisted and
erect
withdrawal,
and object.
Body tense
with sinewy twine
tripping upon mine.
Curled toes and moans
and drips that rush
to meet
hips
that roam
in our dancing tangled sheets.
I am
reaching to own
you
with the steady rhythmic pulse
of purrrs curled to your ears.
Posses, possession, position
to bend my groan
to your grind.
And OH
the wetness of my mind.
It collapses with licks
bridging the gap that sits
and finally
a sigh
un-winds.
Your ability to creat vivid and undeniable erotic scenes without using any of the language usually associated with sex is nothing short of masterful. You're amazing.
OH MY OH MY! How beautifully written with erotic passion. I love this. Thank you for sharing this with me. Hope you have a beautiful day.
Leah
Mary:
So beautifully written with so much love and passion-overflowing with deep desire and eroticism. Simply loved this poem. Thank you for sharing Mary.Have a very safe and beautiful weekend.
Regards,
Dave Richardson
3/25/2004
We share the stares
of gasps silent upon our mouths.
And the slant
of a slide
sinking deep
between my screaming thighs.
(I just wanted to comment on this stanza, because I love it, its a very powerful section of this poem. I love the idea of sharing stares, nothing is said, but everything that needs to be communicated can be done through the eyes. The idea of "screaming thighs" is highly erotic to me, and really gave me a sense of longing. I can imagine its quite an experience to enjoy sex with you Mary *wink*)
Really liked this poem.