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erotic/ mature content West of where
our skin met
in a mist of moist
we went
setting sail.
East of escapism
and ecstasy
we enter the channels
of we,
sucking softly
on the nape of
necks
flooding
our deck.
South of succulent
splendor sweet
and stingy sounds
surround
we run aground
and stay.
North of nips
naughty tastes
till drips abate
we neither
nest nor separate
Navigate
this body map
weathered worn
un-explored erotic
abound in binds
of lip and tongue
of leg and hand,
keep hold
we are so very close
to land.
A little sad but very ummm Sweet. It was wrather insightfull and I liked how you got in all the points of the compass. I will say this much and I hope you forgivee me for it but you are a ver sensual person
Hmm, ok.. my turn.
I nearly banged my computer when I read this poem. (J/K)
I read the bit in the boards where you discuss how younger ones deal with material such as this.. I had to make a crack.. I mean afterall, I AM 17.. arent I? :)
On a more serious note:
It is VERY sexual.. I didnt find it sad at all to be honest.
It sounds more to me like two human beings exploring not only their bodies, but also their minds, trust, passion.. so many feelings packed into one hugh skull-splitting punch-of-a-poem. I found it to be a very terrific poem, a very beautiful form of expression.
Oh, and you need to put a period in this section of your piece..
"North of nips
naughty tastes
till drips abate
we neither
nest nor separate."<----Here.)
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