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With you
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erotic/ mature content with me came the taste, the taste better than wisdom
the sole thoughts of an unquiet soul
trying to smoke the clouds
with me came the drink, the drink better than liquid
the full throb of an untamed heart
trying to sip the ocean
with me came the sounds, the sounds better than music
the blasting beats of irritated lips
lips that miss, and so insist that you must visit more
with me came the scent, the scent better than heaven
the alluring aroma of interested thighs
trying to calm the sighs
with me came the touch, the touch better than skin
the simple stroke through the beaten bones
of the hands that feel through storms
with me came the sights, the sights better than color
the vibrant dreams of a blinded eye
that can only see you...
with me
Well I have read everyting uner this file now. Sorry I didn't crit every one in turn but that's alot of writing. And I do have poems to post myself. Don't want stiff fingers. Though these poems are almost enough to do that to a person. It's great stuff and gets a persons blood flowing. Keep up the good work
A very sensual poem. It seems very personal and that it what I look for in a good poem. I also like the flow and the theme.. very good!
//Brady the Unworthy one.
I have little to say except - very sweet and very sensual. ;0)
phil-carcione@comcast.net
I like this the best of all you have posted here. I'm not usually a fan of repeating a phrase like you do in this piece but it works here. At least for me.
~Phil~