scattering the dreams of new rise,come to me
to be your chief guest ,
and to take you ....
to a new world with the confidence
of a bastard rock,that can float in water...........
the fragrance of flower will say the story of
butterflies with the quest of sweet scent.......
It was written beautifully, however I felt emotionally detached. I wasn't able to grasp anything. Not only was this poem incomplete, but there seemed to be nothing of substance. Just beautiful words and clever thoughts. Try to build around this. Think really hard and I'm sure you can do it.
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