So dreary I have been
No one will let me in
I feel so cold
With no abode
I'd rather have police arrest
Than live with no rest
Oh, dear...
this isnt as good as others
The simplicity makes it very fine indeed as a short poem - lots going on in there. Concise, precise - better is a relative term, but I enjoyed this one for its in your face plain spoken words. - Lady A -
Short but powerful. very well done
Actually
The simplicity makes it very fine indeed as a short poem - lots going on in there. Concise, precise - better is a relative term, but I enjoyed this one for its in your face plain spoken words. - Lady A -
Short but powerful. very well
Short but powerful. very well done