Untitled -- 2.4.2004

I want to kiss you

where other guys ignore

I want to make you feel

like you never felt before



I want to change it

the way you look at everything

I want to give you a reason

a reason for you to sing



I want to fall asleep

wrapped up with you

I want to know

if you feel the same way too

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Liberty Bell's picture

NICE....

Alexis Hunter's picture

AWWWWWW this poem is ADORABLE!!! i love the way you wrote it...it soundz profesional...very cute poem, im gonna read the other one...i hope its az good as this one...keep writeing...u have talent

Katy O.'s picture

awww this poem is so sweet...thnx 4 the comment on my poem and u are also a great writer :)