The darkness deep inside

I had so much.
I was so happy.
Nothing stopped me.
Until they came.

They tore me down, that’s what they did.
Filled me with fear, sorrow and guilt.
They laughed and hit.
I cried and hid.

What is left of me now?
I am having feelings I never should allow.
Nothing stops, it just keeps going.
The sorrow and pain, it just keeps growing.

Now I am this way.
In this world I will not stay.
I have nobody.
So I will get out of your way.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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Seraphim's picture

Well Done

Many of us feel this way
Affecting our lives day by day
That is, until we find the light
Turning our lives into day, from the night

This poem is deep, and well written too
All great poems come from within, that's true
But if you ever need me, before the end,
I am your friend

~Seraphim~


Post Tenebras Spero Lucem

readmy5tuff's picture

i get the feeling. i like it

i get the feeling. i like it and can relate to not wanting to be in this world. if your interested you shpu;d check out couldnt do it on my profile it deals with that issue good write

Black_Veil_Brides's picture

Great :)

I really like it :)

Lovethatred's picture

I love it

I love it


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Iceyflame's picture

Thnx

thnx :D