Forgive me Moon

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Dark Poetry

Forgive me moon,

Forgive me stars.

Forgive people,

Near and far.



As you shine down,

On me tonight.

Remember not the evil,

I have done in my life.



And when you go,

Behind the night clouds.

That's when the evil,

Takes over the crowds.



Hurry, part the clouds,

With your forgiving moon light.

Reassure me,

That everything gonna be alright.



But when I see you,

Shining your light in darkness.

Shine on the road,

That the hazy fog made amiss.



Lead the way stars,

Show me hidden path.

So that I can look back,

And my troubles and laugh.


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Sally's picture

I have a picture of just a moon..

it's very beautiful...your poem seems to fit so I printed it out and hung it up next to my picture...this is really neat thank you for letting me.

Linz's picture

hey i like this poem, it has substance and feeling, and that is good. way to go, you get an A.