Angel

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Love Poetry

When I was young,

I fell in love.

With some one else,

Up above.

She is an angel,

Perfect and clean.

On the hill together we sat,

And I was keen.

I said to her

“Will you marry me”.

She ran away,

And made me unhappy

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?؟ you were like, keen on a hill, for an angel, perfect and clean? how incredibly boring...

No no I like this ...well i like all of your work...at least I think I do...

But a girl on a hill? sitting on a hill?! was her name jill? did she give you a chill? did you throw her at a grill? did your milk cry and spill? Did she let you have a thrill? was she so perfect? was she so clean? oh dreadful me I shouldn't be telling you this...?؟