A la Seconde

Tonight I danced over sandy wooden boards
my body spun and the stars grew under no ones breathe
As I landed to take my bow, I realized that i plied for nothing
It was the world that was spinning, not me

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Afghanistan can be a lonley place at night

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9inety's picture

this is

great poetry

almost like something half forgotten or lost

once there was remeberance
as if moonlit patterns of trapped leaves at midnight when they rustle in the wind

keep writing more
for all of us to enjoy

peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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Thank you Dylan, that was

Thank you Dylan, that was very pretty.