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I knew nothing



But now

when you leave

it gets boring

when I leave

I wish I had stayed

when you leave

it hurts inside

when I leave

the sadness fades in



But when you're there

I'm the happiest anyone could ever be



I'm not one of the many

I don't fit in a category

My thoughts are real

Thought out thoughts

Anyone can say they're happy

But who can say "When you're not there I feel like giving up"?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Ever screamed for someone before?

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 6:22pm
©17 May 2003 - 1:16pm — icantthinkofone
2 October 2006 - 2:47pm — Taylor Everett (not verified)
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hey! I LOVE THE POEM! i feel the exact same way about my g/f.

18 May 2003 - 2:00pm — Lesley Silver (not verified)
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This is so sad .. and beautiful

9 February 2008 - 1:39am — running_with_rabbits
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omg all this back and forth you leave she leaves
it blows my mind graeme!

k thats not healthy graeme
NOT HEALTHY!

ash

Much Love

Ashley