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Destroy
This glass, this window
Make me jump out
Make me bleed
The ground rushes up
To take me
It steals my breath
It takes my pain
It gives you life
Destroy the ground
It give me breath
It takes your life
This glass, this window
Make me jump out
Make me bleed
The ground rushes up
To take me
It steals my breath
It takes my pain
It gives you life
Destroy the ground
It give me breath
It takes your life
not bad but you have much better
this is too melow for you love
its sad to say but I am startign to love your morbid work,
even if you dress far too happy to write it lol :)
ash
Much Love
Ashley
This is pretty good, especially the second stanza but I don't think it's your best work.
Somehoe I thing that you might be holding back some stuff you want to say, Artists can't do that, shouldn't...
you have to give everything you have inside you and more and all the emotions.
Good try though, use all of your talent, you have a lot of it
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss