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Someone There
There's this empty place
It's my empty place
It's like a glass
And you're like the water that fills it
It's like a dark room
And you're the like light that brightens it
It's like a flower with no petals
And you're the petals
It's like a birthday party without the person who it's for
And you're like that person
It's like a waterfall
And you're like the water that flows over it
The best of me is broguht out
When you are close
And then when you leave, the worst in me surfaces again
The undeniable truth that someone should be there
This empty place needs
Someone there
oh la la
graeme has a wonder woman we did not know about
or did we? . . .
no its a good poem
not your best
but good none the less
like the lines
"It's like a glass
And you're like the water that fills it
It's like a dark room
And you're the like light that brightens it"
so cliché but so good
ash
Much Love
Ashley
It's not sad...
?
boo hoo sob sob...blubber
yes it is sad and under normal circumstances I would tell you to get over it but I know there is no point so I shall not do so
good poem
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss