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I Am The Phantom

I am the liar

The phantom

The invisible

I am the lover of souls

I am the distant

The chooser

The inner-rebel

I want to drink you dry

I am the liar

I am the phantom

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I am the one that will set you free

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©13 October 2002 - 7:35am — icantthinkofone
15 October 2002 - 9:27am — running_with_rabbits
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p.s

see i like the poem the way it is i would just say at the bottom in the coments i am the one who will set you free for a coment coz it like hightens it all

ash

Much Love

Ashley

15 October 2002 - 9:24am — running_with_rabbits
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like i told you
to me this is the best
if you read it like clam and slow, with this slight laugh to your vocie its almost eri and like hes mocking you coz he has the power too, almost like he feels he is unstopable and he's god and he can just play with you and toy with you and hurt you and you can't help it, like you want him to,
its soo good to me man

ash

Much Love

Ashley

13 October 2002 - 9:35pm — Nicole.J.Burgess
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Well as I said before, I think that this is fantastic so great job once again.
I love the way that you word everything,I can almost picture it
nikki

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