Fucked Up

My fucked up

Life

Doesn't make

Sense

Love seems to be

Vacant

In my

Fucked up

Life

My heart is

Alive

In my

Fucked up

Life

Too much

Caring

Heart burning

Soul is ice

In

My fucked up life

Author's Notes/Comments: 

If you know how to do something, don't do it. Does that make sense? It sort of does... Like, if you know how to hurt someone, don't.

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Savannah Tangen's picture

HA HA HA HE HE HE lol HAHA... That was soooo funny. HEHE. I didnt understand what the hell she was talking about either. HAHA just the way you wrote that was so hillarious. I just had to burst out laughing. You made my day. ha ha hehehaha ha. *sigh

icantthinkofone's picture

What??? What the HELL are you talking about? I had to read that three times, and I still don't understand why that was written!

???

Yadira's picture

I believe that in order to get some others attention with this writing and to actually get a focus on to this piece of writing there are some words that instead of capturing my attention they they give me a sence of disgust.Why? Well not only do they use the Fucked up words but aren't even used making any sence with the rest involved. But I guess there is some thing that really made me feel as though to read it is that I wanted to actually understand why this person expressed its self this way.The words though should be words that makes you get the feel and with more detail to it.

Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

Hey,
well your life can't be that fucked up so be happy, it's really thugh.
nikki
oh it's good though


Nicole.J.Burgesss

running_with_rabbits's picture

its ok
i was twice as lost as you were

i think she writes for spounge bob sqare pants!

:)


Much Love

Ashley