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When you're sitting here like I am with nothing to lose. A knife or a pen, which do I choose? I'm stuck here again, with nothing to say. Waiting for the light of a new day. When will it come? The darkness is blinding. I just can't wait for the sun to be shining. But the darkness consumes all. Leaving no where to run. No where to crawl. Imprisoned by the dark, inside of my head. The light is on, but I am dead.

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©19 September 2011 - 5:50am — iAmWaves
25 October 2011 - 6:10am — iAmWaves
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To all who have given me feedback

I really appreciate it so much. Thank you guys! :D

26 September 2011 - 9:50am — kiwi
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The Darkness

Having had periods of insomnia off and on throughout my life I can sympathise. The night seems so long.

Smile.. it is the cheapest facelift.

26 September 2011 - 4:14am — emphasis
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hhmmmm...

not a better way to release some stress then to put it in lyrical rhyme
I love the piece... but not the driving force behind it... : (
I hope ur days get brighter!!

** smile for me!!**

26 September 2011 - 4:05am — mcillancadfish
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I'm in awe...wow

This is a much better depiction of how I feel in my worst nights. Every line has a rhythm to it... I like it a lot.

Thanks for sharing, It's nice to know and remember that I'm not the only one who feels like this sometimes:)

25 October 2011 - 5:59am — iAmWaves
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@mcillancadfish

We are not alone. :o
And thanks you for the feedback. It means a lot.