I turn the lights on, but everything stays dim.
I turn blue from no air, but gasping does not help.
I should be off doing things I am not aware of.
I should move, but I don't quite know where to.
I take off but keep moving in circles instead of
forgetting what needs to be forgotten.
I remember all the times together,
I remember a drunken haze, and you in my veins
I knew you were scared of whom I became.
I knew you expected to be disappointed.
I guess you saw me for what I was. Pity
I still don't know who you are.
Powerful Play
Loved the ending. Loved the middle and the beginning wasn't too shabby. There is so much drama in your outpouring offerings - Lady A
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Thanks, I am most moved by
Thanks, I am most moved by art if it is very tragic.
And at this point in my life - my life seems to imitate the art I love. Therefore, the drama.
I am glad you like it. I changed it around a bit though, seems more natural to me now.