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another night

why do i wait with eyes

stretched open

struggling to stay awake

just to hear the annoying ring of my phone

and already know

it's you

so you can drunkenly slur to me

that you're down and depressed

so i call the next day to see how you are

and you don't remember calling me at all

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 6:20pm
©6 September 2003 - 9:50pm — hushbaby
15 March 2004 - 6:30am — mts* (not verified)
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so i already critiqued it once.. but i just read it again... is this about me??

7 September 2003 - 7:02am — jb (not verified)
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and i know how you feel. it blows.

7 September 2003 - 6:42am — mts (not verified)
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i like it