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I look at myself in pictures

Happy and smiling

but am I really?

I know there's something hidden that won't go away

I try to suppress it

and act like it's not there

but I think it is

I know it is

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Kathy Nguyen's picture

All smiles to this poem! And I'm REALLY smiling! We all feel this way once in a while. I like the uncertainty in this poem, for it creates a sense of wonder to readers. Since this poem is untitled, do you mind if I suggest some titles? Below are a list of some I've quickly created from my head!

Hidden Character (or Personality)
Two-Faced
Hidden Face
Mirrored

Your poem is worth a great title! :) I enjoyed this piece very much!

~Kathy