would i be missed
in the hustle and bustle?
what about the cousins who race behind me
chasing each other
or the adults
talking in overly loud whispers
about
why did she pierce herself?
or what is that thing on her face?
songs go on
the world goes on
without me
simply waiting for someone to give me the time of day
they won't
is it because of a measly hole
that my mom failed to tell no one about?
it was like every other word
when did you get that done?
why did you do that?
what is that thing?
did it hurt?
gross, i cant look at it!
well thanks,
but i don't care what you think
you can keep that
to yourself
all of a sudden
no one sees me
they see the disobediant, wild-child that my mom has been describing for days
dude, i think it is HOT...
This poem is really good, I like it a lot. And...I know what your feeling because the same type of thing happened to Kate. Don't worry, I LOVE IT...and you of course!
you pierced your eyebrow!!!??? jack i am so jealous! i think that is one of the COOLEST places to get pierced...if i knew i wouldn't get killed, i'd pierce it too. man i gotta SEE this thing! oh and rockin poem too. i know what you are talking about, although not with the piercing, just with my general brooding and weirdness. we gotta hook up SOON girl.
jac i am sorry. i kinda think its funny