Dirty Bathwater

Edge of the tub

crying

you don't seem to notice me

Something else fills your head

I'm pushed out

without realizing it

then I do

I cry all over again

I want to be near him all the time

for a lack of better options

he might get stuck with the same

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Beth Maggard's picture

beautiful title jax, i love it

Marianne Chrisos's picture

Beautiful...I had to critique and tell you I have been here and you captured the emotion perfect. :-)