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Tanning
They walk in, hoping to transform their paleness into beautiful bronze hues. Lying in the communal bed, letting those unsafe rays tan the outside, but char the inside. We go for beauty over health because pale is out and tan is in.
A well said peom If only more people would realise it though
James Darr Author of Poetry's New Leash On Life
Very true!
Besides, who wants to look 45 by the time they're 27?
Good job!
Keep writing!
I agree with this statement but I don't receive this as a poem. I'm no critic, it's just an opinion. I like it and agree with it though.
I loved your poem. You seem to be a prophetess,saying to people
its better to not be only beautiful on the outside. Your "beauty"
seems to say to me-for what purpose would you let your insides be
"charred" because society says tan is beautiful. I think your poem is spiritual
and provokes us into thinking about the superficial. You are talented-keep going!!!
I will come back to your website to read more of your poems.
Greg
Cool Poem
i agree. i shouldn't but i do.
LOL~ thats a goodie (FAKE) is a way of life for way too many now,i like fair skin looks and getting te best photos i use to powder puff it on for the best results anyway lol enjoyable---hey a new girl band LADIES & BOYS THE FAKE BAKERS yeaaaaa lol thanks
not to be mean or anything, but have you ever heard of to each his own?