you will not be afraid of death once...

you will not be afraid of death 

once you know

you have fullfilled 

your core's

purpose.

 

sure I am afraid of death

because I have not fullfilled

my core's purpose yet.

 

before leaving this world

I want to make sure

that at least

I've left an impact on

a hurting soul.

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S74rw4rd's picture

A fine impact, your poems

I think your poems already have an impact accomplished.  To write a poem like this at your age shows an unusally accelerated wisdom.  In my own reading experience, most poets write this kind of poem at the end of their lives, not earlier.  But you have written this now, which means you have it out of the way to be able to go on to greater accomplishments.


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thanks!:)

thanks!:)