Tomorrow will be a better day
I saw that through
a glass of a martini
I saw me hugging you
You lean your lovely head on my shoulder
Your soft hair tickles my cheeks
Your warm breath tickles my mind
And I saw a big smile all over the horizons
I felt the tender meaning of life
I cherished the moment
And felt pleased
To hold you in my arms
(in my imagination)
And through your eyes
I had a vision :
I foresaw
a brighter Tomorrow
---
Istanbul
1:51 am
December 1, 2010
I really like the imagery you
I really like the imagery you used here, it makes the piece alive (as imagery does to poetry and prose). My favorite lines are: "I felt the tender meaning of life/I cherished the moment/And felt pleased." They just were "Wow..." (in a good way) for me. I really liked this piece.
--Essie