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"Life Isn't Fair"

It Was Very Silent
Nothing Made A Sound
Someone Knocked At The Door
And Then She Was Found

Her Little Body
It Was So Cold And Blue
They Got Down On There Knees
And Searched For A Clue

Why Did She Do This?
Why Didn't She Leave A Note?
They Went To Her Room
On The Walls This Is What She Wrote...

"I Told You I Would Do It,
I Was Never Scared.
I Was Just Waiting To See,
If Anyone Cared."

She Was At Her Funeral
She Saw Those That Were There
And Surprisingly Enough
She Saw That You Do Care

You Were Crying
And Holding Her Lifeless Hand
You Put A Picture In The Casket
It Was Him And Her Cuddling In The Sand

A Tear Rolled Down Her Face
She Wants To Be There
But She Can't
She Screams "Life Isn't Fair!"

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Suicide Is Something Most People Think About At Least Once In Their Life. But The Face Is Once You're Gone There's No Way You Can Come Back. So I Wrote This Poem About A Girl That Killed Herself To See If This Boy Did Care And When She Saw That He Did She Wanted To Be With Him, But Now She Can't.

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last updated 29 December 2010 - 6:11am
©30 May 2007 - 2:16am — Shellysweetness
30 May 2007 - 3:23am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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very very powerful piece........

30 May 2007 - 3:44am — Colin "Satyr" McNamara (not verified)
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heh... sounds like it was her own fault... she could have made other choices... better ones. Now apparently she's realized her mistake in your poem... but like you said... it's too late...

hopefully you'll never make that choice yourself. Always look to the music and other inspirations to keep your head high.