I have recieved a box today: the perfect shape, a decent weight, unsoiled,
concise, clear-cut. What a box to behold. What a trap to unfold. I rest this
object against my heart, in my arms, close to my breath. What a thing I do
not want. I return it. The perfect little box I do not want.
Looking over at the other doorsteps, it is evident that the neighbors
are enchanted by their box. Though I do not believe they know, all of
the boxes are the same. I first feel pride to no longer be in ownership of the
parcel. Oh, how rewarding it is to see everyone with it and me so free from
the foolishness. The exact same box everywhere. The pride fades slowly. I
do not have room for a box, nor do I want something so commonplace.
Yet, I do not have one and the others do.
I begin to think; who now has the box? I wonder if the person in possession
will treasure it as greatly as those around. What an elaborate lie to succumb
to. Their infatuation will never last. They are filling gaps in their houses to the
point of clutter. That is not for me. My rooms are indefinite, without gratuity
blocking the walkway. They are spaceless. Spaceless and empty.
Although I want nothing more than to elate in the enlightenment, I do not. Others
believed in the hoax, found meaning in it. I found meaning meaning in unveiling it.
And now, I do not.
Oh, how the ambiguity howls to me at night. I want to be decieved. I crave it;
I need it. But, no amount of scavenging through post offices will lead me to it.
I try, only to never find. I will not recieve the box. The perfect little box I did not want.
I, instead, recieve a search and a desire. The choice to reject familiarity and to
exist entirely in the pursuit is the wasteland I am left to wander, with a barren walk,
and a never-ending step. The box is lost and so is the journey. This is my plight.
Thinking
Outside the box, extraordinary expectations
all things are possible
the journey continues.
Koko
well written,Lass!
Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
amazing
I would be intellectually dishonest with myself if I didn't try and make assumptions about what the box was for you, but I'm just as dumbfounded wondering what a box like that would mean for me. You really made me think with this and I found myself a little more curious about myself. A fantastic write, so thought out its no wonder why its such a greatpiece a good testament to your style. Thanks for the read.
"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin
Thank you so much! I'm so
Thank you so much! I'm so flattered and so glad you enjoyed it.
First let me say
I love your explanation.
It brings the poem together
Without me wracking my brain.
Second, I was just thinking how I
Hate to explain my poems because
The factor you mentioned and the duality in most
Of my poems.
Someone was PM'en me asking questions
About my poems and not commenting out
In the open.
I aint into that.
Once, twice ok but that is quite enough.
Just sayin.
Thanks for the open explanation.
I needed it ( probably ).
Very intelligent.
KS
Thank you very much ^_^ I
Thank you very much ^_^ I don't usually like to explain my poems either... because I usually go into a whole long, tedious rant... I think this one is a bit more concise...I've spared you all ^_^ thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
"what a thing i do not want"
is the box a soul? to reject sameness and realize it's all you needed? this is powerful and completely relateable in my spiritual walk. seeking salvation from boxlessness
There's a little ambiguouity
There's a little ambiguouity left to the readers imagination... the box can be anything... it's the thing you're looking for... that you once rejected... the thing you think will give your life meaning.... and for each person, the answer is of course varying... i also want to note that the speaker sent back the box... because they wanted to be their own person... to be unique and not fit into society's rules.... to ultimately find individuality... and that resulted in them becoming even more lost, hopeless, and disillusioned.... because the idea of being unique... is really not so unique... everyone wants to different... the one.. the superhero... but the real heroes realize that life is meaningful in itself... there is no void to fill until the second you decide to fill it... so basically the quest of purposefulness is an illusion that only leaves people empty... and in a constant search to find something that doesn't really exist
well put
it can be a blessing or a curse, just depending on how you live and view life!
My Box Is Sacred
I keep it under the bed where no one will ever look. Its contents are high security sealed, no one may see its contents. Great write - enjoyed thoroughly, the elusive "box" :D - Stella
Haha, I like that! Thank you
Haha, I like that! Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)