no more paradise

And so, 

The animals

of the forest

conspired to burn

landowners out

from their homes

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allets's picture

Ouch, That Scorches

Well written and powerful and topical. Nature rebels - absolutely the cause. Keep writing it like this and I'll have to help you put together a book - if you want with this as the Title Poem.


 

 

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That...

Sounds like a really good idea


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Stella!!!

Your messages are turned off and I'd like to talk more to you about this... 


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word_man's picture

not my bambi

not my bambi


ron parrish

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Probably not bambi

but it's devasating! 

 

It started from a campfire as i understand it.

So i imagined some little devious forest creatures taking revenge.

...they burnt paradise cuz they'd put up a parking lot...


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they wont let anybody clean

they wont let anybody clean out under brush,dead trees,etc


ron parrish

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...

If beurocracy got out of the way, we the people could manage it all better


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well they know best,,don`t

well they know best,,don`t they ? some people is proud to be stupid


ron parrish

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:p

evidenced by our entire potitical system


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allets's picture

Amen

The scenery of pines in the distance suddenly don't look so scenic after your house burns down with all your stuff in it. Hmmmmm...