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Chorus for my attempt at a pop song

I got just one feeling

It's all that's left

I got just one feeling

What I do best

Please don't hurt it, 

it's all I got

I got just one feeling

We call it love

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Someone, help me write this

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©29 October 2018 - 5:02pm — Jesster
30 October 2018 - 9:40pm — allets
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If I Had One Feeling

If I only had one feeling

love would be the one

but without fear

I'd probably die young.

 

I may need three more feelings

compassion, doubt, and sorrow.

If I only had one feeling

I wouldn't be alive.

.

How's that - I always challenge premises. We are a bundle of emotions which is what makes music music. La la la la ah oh la. :D

 

 

 

31 October 2018 - 5:47am — Jesster
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ha

compassion is an action

fear is in our minds

doubt is just a lack of faith

the feeling's only love

 

I always enjoy your challenge to premise...

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30 October 2018 - 12:13am — georgeschaefer
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You can't just tease us.  Now

You can't just tease us.  Now you have to write the whole song.

30 October 2018 - 12:29am — Jesster
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:)

I can tease if i want to. lol. :P

Really, was hoping for a collaborator. 

Or, i'm gonna have to go subject myself to pop so i can get a better feel. Hmmm....

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