Mt. Lemon

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Jesster

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The pains came from looking backwards.

Down that twisted shadowy path.

It made everthing look distorted.

The love was looking sad.

I'm not sure why it happened.

But then again I am.

It was all the self defeating.

Left its imprint in the sand.

It broke my heart to see it wrong.

For I knew that love had sung its song.

So as the twisted shadows grew...

My heart, it broke in more than two.

Author's Notes/Comments:

My friend titled it without hearing it. I decided to keep it.

(of course, it's a freewrite. Cus that's just what I do)

last updated 18 June 2016 - 3:20pm
©18 June 2016 - 3:19pm — Jesster

18 June 2016 - 5:29pm — Sassylass

bittersweet,sad!

excellent writing of prose!

koko~

Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

1 July 2016 - 2:28pm — Jesster

thanks Koko! Bitter sweet... well, I'll think of it as Dark chocolate.