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Unworthy Tree

 

She went to the garden to pick some fruit. 
From the oldest tree with the deepest roots.
The fruit was yellow with patches of brown.
She always ate it when she felt down.
The taste was bitter, rotten and sour.
You'd think she'd rather eat a fresh flower.
But this fruit would feed her sorrowful thoughts.
Just what she needed, right then on the spot.
Confirmation, "Unworthy is me!"
She's eaten the fruit of the Unworthy Tree.
 
 
 
 
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©3 February 2016 - 3:33am — Jesster
4 February 2016 - 5:33am — bishu
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very very nice !!

much liked... 

©bishu 

 

4 February 2016 - 5:45am — Jesster
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:)

thanks Bishu! 

Big smiles...

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3 February 2016 - 11:46pm — mrpoofs
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ooooh this is good. Ive eaten

ooooh this is good. Ive eaten from this tree many a time. Hope you are not the protagonist

4 February 2016 - 3:43am — Jesster
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I ate it! Dang that

I ate it! Dang that tree! 

protagonist is better than antagonist Tho.. Right?

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4 February 2016 - 11:45pm — mrpoofs
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hahaha yeah antagonist would

hahaha yeah antagonist would be quite lame

5 February 2016 - 6:53am — Jesster
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Right?

though most good stories do have one

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8 February 2016 - 11:44pm — mrpoofs
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very true, although mine may

very true, although mine may not. Does society and drugs count?

9 February 2016 - 1:25am — Jesster
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Yup! I think so...

Yup! I think so...

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3 February 2016 - 9:01am — KindredSpirit
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Is that a twist at the end

Rise again.

KS

4 February 2016 - 3:45am — Jesster
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trying...... gotta turn the

trying......

gotta turn the twist into a dance I think

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