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Hostile Is Good i think you are the person that invented tears.
i think you are an absolute waste of my years.
i think you get a hard on from making me weep.
i think you know i toss and turn when i sleep.
i think you are my EX or something of that sort,
i think you are the one that's going to be a tear late and a tissue short.
sometimes, i think i should kill your ass.
naw, i'm just playing but don't put nothing past me.
i think you know now how a crazy bitch can be.
it's funny because I think YOU are insane.
i think you notice the disdain that dwelled in my eyes, as I sat there and listened as you lied.
i think you are rather slow.
i think you are a hoe.
i don't think you deserve a 15th chance, let alone a second glance.
i do think a woman will come along and take a stance, on your heart and won't deserve your hand and then...
you'll see how it feels,
you'll see that this gut wrenching torment is real.
i think you are rather sick.
i think you should REALLY stop bragging on your dick. (sorry)
i think you never knew what you had.
this isn't a hate letter(ok it is a little), so
don't think i'm mad.
in fact with glee, i'm thinking of myself.
i know my wealth, and that's why i think you're scared.
i think somewhere inside you cared., but the way you showed it was kinda fucked up.
i think this is the end so good luck.
i think this should halt all the thing you do.
i think you are aware now of what i think of you.
Honor, girl how have u been????? I hope good! I just came back to your site and remember this one in particular. My fav line is the first one,"'i think you are the person that invented tears.'"
Girl ck out my site when u can theres some poems that I would love for u to read.
Love,
jada
Damn!! Hot Damn!! Double, Triple, and Infinity Damn!! I LOVE this piece guuuurrrll!!! I love the rawness, the emotion, the truth, and the proof of the realities in the way you feel~ This guy never deserved you and was oh so stupido to have ever let you go-You are Amazing- he'll be sorry he lost you, you know this, I'm sure... I love the catchiness in the repetitive flow, the realness in this line here "sometimes, i think i should kill your ass.
naw, i'm just playing but don't put nothing past me.
i think you know now how a crazy bitch can be." And the way you disparage his mental flaws, character, and shortcomings- My favorite part is this one "i think you should REALLY stop bragging on your dick. (sorry)" hahaha!! LMAO!! Way ta tell 'im about himself!! And yeah, I do have a few pieces written along this vein, as I have been dissed by many a man in my past, and I love how you encapsulate my feelings, your feelings, and any other woman in such a position's feelings, all in this in one joint- I think that the ending line sums up the poem exactly as it should be "i think you are aware now of what i think of you." and I think that it's 'perfect perfection' in the selection of the title 'Exscreamly Hostile' I love that- in fact, it reminds me of an old Pantera title/song 'F*cking Hostile' nothing relieves stress and anger better than screaming that song out loud when you're runnin around the house. This could be made into a kick ass song- I can envision Macy, Phish, or Alannis doin somethin with this, adding a chorus and hollerin it out with the feeling of someone who's been there before- Anyways girli- love it- Fire, pure fire- the righteous fury of a woman who has been wronged~ I hope that he has seen, or someday will see, this poem and feel all crunchy for being such a fool- Kudos for taking adversity and letting it make you stronger, and for being done with him instead of staying weak for him... Great work in this piece- tell 'im like it is gurrrrl!!