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"Gloom and Doom"
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others Nothing ever last forever,
why do you think there out into space.
to find a new planet becuase ares
is heading for gloom and doom.
Have you ever wandered why the
worlds so bad.
All those people are dieing
I find that really sad.
My heart is breaking for what
I know.
and yet I fear to tell another
soul.
God has his plans all made so
long ago.
He's not changing the order so
we got to go.
Up to the king who sits on
the throne.
He knows who staying and he
knows who's alone.
If you do not know who he is
it's not to late to dismiss.
Find the peace within your heart,
and you know you'll never be
apart.
Don't sweep this under the carpet
with your broom,
We are already in gloom and now
heading for doom.
agree once again with your ending line that sums everything up here
very scary thought, but oh so true. i love "gloom and doom". though i find it a little too repetitive, it gets your point across well. the hidden messages and what blanks you leave the reader to fill in highlight this piece. (Normally open-ended poems are a bad thing). a million things ran through my mind as to why our world is headed for destruction. you've pulled me in with your title, held my attention throughout, and thereafter the end. nicely done.
MR