Loneliness

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~A Ponygirl Design~





My mind filled with silence of the dark were it's lonely

and dry.  My heart shattering to pieces that falls of nothing good and nothing bad.  I'm trapped where ever I go, no doors,

no windows nothing but walls were I bounce off of. No air to ,

I die slowly of loneliness.  I dropped without a beat.

The silence took it away. I went.

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

Profound description in this piece. I like picture it's tranquil not lonely...

Greg Smale II's picture

That was a powerful but true poem I know how you feel, I feel the same way with out Karyn. Thank you for reading one of my poems

Dale Harrison's picture

very powerful poem. really brings across the nature and the feeling of what it's like to be alone. i like it alot

Chris Baldwin's picture

Wow, that was very good,lonliness! Deep Deep! Well check out what your heart has to say and you can write a whole lot more! :) :) :)

jgupta's picture

You have shared your lonliness, you are lonely no more. It is a wonderful place -- Post Poem Address -- We may walk our miles and talk to one another in vociferous silence...
You write to grace and that is what makes the world of poetry -- worthy.

Lori Broussard's picture

You are a great poet, wonderful analasys, keep going!