Can this work?

Living apart, how did i survive, together once more, again I'm alive.

Some things have changed, others the same, you broke my trust, still want my name.

My love still endless, more forgiving than some, struggling with the past, back when we were young.

When the same words, you used to say, I love you more, There is no way.






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bendergender's picture

Great rime and meter right up till the last line. It seems a bit choppy to read. Other than that enjoyed. Cheers.