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My Pain
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My poems Why won't my pain just go?
Instead all it does is grow
There is only one way that I know
To stop the pain once and for all
But do I dare go there
I'm not sure if I will or won't
But every time I say no
More pains seep in through the cracks
Maybe it's time I said goodbye
Maybe it's time for me to go
Never to come back to this evil world
That I've come to know
a Strong and very emotional
a Strong and very emotional poem you have written here.
The title is not at all bad just maybe a little overused?
A few suggestions for a title...
"Lacerations of the heart" or
"Constant fatality" or "Life ache" (instead of headache, life ache, see where im goin with this lol)or "My afflicted soul"
or "Damn agony"
and perhaps lastly "feelings of the condemned and abandoned"
this is just me, but feel free to use any one of those ideas if you like (or any variation of the such but im sure you will come up with something). I have had to come up with titles for poems about pain myself. Anyway Good luck and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Ascesa e rialzarsi fino a quando gli agnelli diventano leoni
Rise and Rise again until Lambs become lions
ok listen pal i only chose
ok listen pal i only chose the title cuz i dont like long titles that much and this is how i actually feel only i can never express all of my feelings in ths
Love and hate go hand in hand for eternity
Okay im not sure whats going
Okay im not sure whats going on here but I already mentioned that I loved your poem, that it was a strong and authentic portrayal of your emotions but I decided to throw a few title suggestions your way because you said in your authors notes that
"ok so i absolutely positively hate the title i just couldnt think of anything but im open to any suggestions that u have"
these are your words and I was only trying to help
I am not sure if you forget you wrote these or what?
cause im real confused.
but if you didnt want any title suggestions than I do suggest you dont say so in your authors notes next time, yeah? lol
like I said I respect and enjoyed this piece and was only trying to help my fellow writers
gee I thought this was a community
but I guess I was wrong
Ascesa e rialzarsi fino a quando gli agnelli diventano leoni
Rise and Rise again until Lambs become lions
srry
im srry i wasnt feelin that good that day and i was bein bitchy to everyone so again srry and hope u didnt take it the wrong way
Love and hate go hand in hand for eternity
nah its cool I was just
nah its cool
I was just really confused cause you said you were open to title suggestions and then flipped.
but hey I can understand you were just not feelin it that day
no sweat
Ascesa e rialzarsi fino a quando gli agnelli diventano leoni
Rise and Rise again until Lambs become lions
Some great ideas there, and
Some great ideas there, and good springboards for new thoughts.