i quit all this shit
why can't my life just
be normal?
why cant they just tell me
what is wrong with me
when i ask them?
i have tried everything
in my power
to fix
whatever is wrong
and it never works out.
it feels like
my curtain
finally closed over my life
and the sun
can only get in sometimes,
and then
the shadows cover my sun
mercilessly taking away
any chance of getting better.
i am losing everyone that
is my sun,
i tried to keep them
and now
i quit.
This poem rocks! I actually like it more than a few others of yours I have read, honestly. And by the way, none of your poetry is embarrassing, Ms. Trill is!
I love it but it so sad it makes me wanna cry. but i think we all feel that way sometimes. It will all be ok in the end. But i still love you zingg!!!