I Quit

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i quit all this shit

why can't my life just

be normal?

why cant they just tell me

what is wrong with me

when i ask them?

i have tried everything

in my power

to fix

whatever is wrong

and it never works out.

it feels like

my curtain

finally closed over my life

and the sun

can only get in sometimes,

and then

the shadows cover my sun

mercilessly taking away

any chance of getting better.

i am losing everyone that

is my sun,

i tried to keep them

and now

i quit.

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Tristan Dostal's picture

This poem rocks! I actually like it more than a few others of yours I have read, honestly. And by the way, none of your poetry is embarrassing, Ms. Trill is!

Kendra Parzych's picture

I love it but it so sad it makes me wanna cry. but i think we all feel that way sometimes. It will all be ok in the end. But i still love you zingg!!!