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Midnight Lover
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Love Candles lit about me
warming glow
Silk and satin against my skin
so delicate
Naked as a babe just born
the beginning
His heat next to me
his nearness
A hand stroking and exploring my body
evil sensations
Lips upon lips
a butterfly's touch
Kisses and licks
so wet
Caresses my secret place
Please more
His mouth fueling the fire
so hot
Naked flesh against naked flesh
such anticipation
His hot, long, rigid sex rubbing against me
the pleading
My hips meet his thrust
burning
Rhythm after rhythm, motion after motion
my hunger growing
Faster and faster
moaning for more
Deeper and deeper
pleasure and passion colliding
Him calling my name
i feel like i'm flying
Me calling his name
one last thrust
Explosions
He collaspes next to me
i kiss his lips
He holds me close
i toss over us the sheets
He whispers to me
I love you Amanda
Sleep.
I wake up.
worth the visit
i liked it to :*) .
I thought that I should read one of your love poems as opposed to all of your dark ones, and I'm glad that I did. Very good imagery, to say the least. I can't really find anything wrong with it except for a few flow issues because of the mismatched syllables in places such as "Kisses and licks" compared to "so wet." Very good job, I hope your fantasy becomes a reality some day ;)
Why are the sensations evil?
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