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Itchy Eyes
The pendulem swings and knocks
A mouse scurries in the corner
Shadows are still
Air is humid and putrid
Spirits creep around
My depression seeps through
The heaviness of my eyes
And the depth of my dreams
Just anogther passing night
oh crud this was painful. I was curious about the eyes. they don't seem itchy when they are tired, aww but yes they are. You seem to go back to another time in this poesm. I was there as I read it. Reminds me of the hunckback of notre dame. One thing I did notice was the interuption of flow from line seven to line eight.It sounds like you are sleepy and describing your invironment. And then it moves to dreams. When did you fall asleep? Or is this a Dream? It was just unclear. Also, I have never seen this spelling of pendulum. The one that swings has a second u.