WHIRL WIND

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AFZAL SHAUQ

How it happened..?
I do not know
When I looked at myself
I saw
the tree of youth
 You came into my life
like a whirl wind
changing everything
and now
it is all so different.
 the tree of youth
has thrown down its leaves
the ground is covered
and I...
left in confusion..
 and since you came
and in your wake
the damage was done
God knows...
what you truely was
 My first thought
you was a just a girl
then perhaps a fairy
could be...
just the first winds of time.

 AFZAL SHAUQ

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read both pieces you posted very impressive

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Too many a's

You was a just a girl ? God knows what you truly were? Simply stated, a prose poem. about whirlwinds and falling leaves that equal change. - Lady A