AS THE DAY BREAKS

Looking at you

from afar



standing in the

shadows.



an illusion

a mirage



vanishing as the

day breaks..

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chris's picture

I liked this poem. I thought the imagery was nice. It seemed to suggest a night dream. a fantasy ending as the day approaches.

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

this reminds me of daydreaming about John in the morning when he is not here and I'm sitting here having my morning coffee.. Bitter sweet because wonderful thoughts of him but missing him so much when he is gone..