FALLING ASLEEP (Cinquain)

Folder: 
CINQUAIN

Finding
hollow trees

making themselves beds

quickly closing their eyes

asleep

 

 

(c) copyright heather burns

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Falling Asleep.

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I like this but myself would have added something about birds or woodland creatures so you knew what was falling asleep in the tree but that's just me..