When I saw you today
I wanted to reach out
and shout my love across mountain tops
...but there are no mountains here
Just a place where I am unaware
of your presense...
Though, still, you're in my thoughts
and when I stop to take a breath
I feel you near, and I steer
my thoughts toward you
and breathe you in...
Love's echo extends "beyond
Love's echo extends "beyond the canyon's depth" ♥♥ (I feel you, huni)
....
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Yes, and the echo goes on and
Yes, and the echo goes on and on and on.... thanks nightlight!
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your title
your title and lack there of helped inspire me. "Title Me" and "Title Free". Honestly, I don't think you should title it. The abstractness of the poem is what gives it character, depth, and leaves the doors of comprehension wide open. It could be you seeing someone or you're drinking in the vapors of nature.
Thank you poetic eyes! I
Thank you poetic eyes! I really like your take on it.. :)
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