Reach....

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Unburried roots

When I saw you today

I wanted to reach out

and shout my love across mountain tops

...but there are no mountains here

Just a place where I am unaware

of your presense...

Though, still, you're in my thoughts

and when I stop to take a breath

I feel you near, and I steer

my thoughts toward you

and breathe you in...

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nightlight1220's picture

Love's echo extends "beyond

Love's echo extends "beyond the canyon's depth" ♥♥ (I feel you, huni)

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Yes, and the echo goes on and

Yes, and the echo goes on and on and on.... thanks nightlight!


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Poetic_Eyes's picture

your title

your title and lack there of helped inspire me. "Title Me" and "Title Free". Honestly, I don't think you should title it. The abstractness of the poem is what gives it character, depth, and leaves the doors of comprehension wide open. It could be you seeing someone or you're drinking in the vapors of nature. 

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Thank you poetic eyes! I

Thank you poetic eyes! I really like your take on it.. :)


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