As the saying goes, life is a rollercoaster.
Highs and lows,dips and bends,
Twisting, turning,
And oh so fast
When you reach a low,
You can feel alone,
Feel so empty,
Feel so scared
The world on you shoulders,
Weighing you down,
Trying to cope,
Trying to hold on
Sometimes you slip,
But always hold on,
For someone so small,
You are so strong
This dark tunnel,
Will come to an end,
For this path of darkness,
Has a bend
Your world will be flooded,
With streams of light,
Without even knowing,
You've put up a fight
Just remember my words,
Your not alone,
Your beautiful, a miracle
With a heart of gold
You won't always feel it,
Courage doesn't always rawr,
But you are a lion,
And warm to the core
Nice.
I really like the flow of the poem. (smooth)
And at the end of the poem it gave off a since of a hope and confidence.
~ Overall Nice Poem~
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