a poem about autumn leaves falling

porcelian breaks not bruises

bruises are black

poorcelian stays white as it falls apart in the rain

drowning in puddles

pushed by soles of shoes

into the dead soul of concrete paradise

Eden is urbanised

theres more than 2 beings

and palms are skyscrapers

that get closer to the sky



Porcelian cracks under careless shoes

Bruises line the hips of shadow girls

but you cant tell the difference.

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yellowspecks's picture

Wow, this is a great peice very original. Ive read only two of your poems so far, but you have amazing talent. I will continue reading. Rae

Seryddwr's picture

This poem is great, but the last two lines, chilling as they are, add a huge amount of power to what is already there.


Seryddwr