EYES OF THE NIGHT

lights in the night sky

blinking.....

scanning.....

looking......



helicopter flying high in the sky

circling.....

hovering.....

waiting......



lost little soul running in the dark

oh what in the world did you do

lost little soul hiding in the shadows

oh what in the world are you going to do


Author's Notes/Comments: 

moved my computer... now I am at a window... this is the frist inspiration from the new area.... night sky with a helicopter flying around and looking for something.....

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Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee
You have such a wonderful imagination... and it always shows through your poetry. I too, like to look at something and make up the whole story from there. Thanks for sharing. :)
Roz

Carla Mobley's picture

You certainly capture a moment. Sounds like the beginning of a story to me.

gentle's picture

Very intense, almost frightening!!! Again, I like the change in your style. It gives your piece movement, if you know what I mean. Amy


Gentle is the night♥

Tim / manatee Marshall's picture

HEY~ great piece here,YOU will probally look out the window more now lol,nice thoughts seem you where hoping who ever didn't get caught--BUT it could of been a killer -so be careful L&P