heart pounding

mind racing

body shakes

words thought

actions done

fingers move

breaths speeding

head aches

tears flow

letters written

decisions made

alone again

mad as hell

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Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee I liked the way this one read! It felt like being mad, if that makes any sense. Great read! Roz :)

Miranda Rae's picture

Renee, I like the quick pace of this poem; it fits with the feeling of mad angry blood rushing through veins at a fast pace or the speed that angry words rush to mind when you're ticked off.